"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
©Susie Clevenger 2014
Very vivid analogy, Susie, and very well expressed. And you know I can seriously relate.
Neat! Painful. Pealed/peeled word play hit me as truth in eyes, ears, and memory. So few words, such a big truth.
Love the bloodshot words peeled from walls of insomnia. So visual.
Excellent description here, Susie. That 'peeled' is an excellent choice of word.
painful truth...and power packed words...
ouch - I feel this. Too close to home.
I'm loving the vivid imagery, too. Excellent, Susie.
Wow! That's something to feel and keep. <3
bloodshot words - a play, nearly, on bloodshot wounds ? ~
Oh, my. "Peeled from walls..." Fantastic.
Susie, these words set the tone so well "no lullabies". Vivid take on insomnia!
yeah, ouch! i know this feeling.
That is brutal. I hate when I can't sleep.
Unfortunately I can sooo relate.
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