"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Hope your daughters surgery goes well, great prompt to ponder on.
How often do we spin in the throes of love not heeding the absence of that safety net?
That's the hardest thing about mother love - no damn safety net. May all go well, Susie. Thinking of your family.
Beautiful/scary to risk the edge without the safety net--in full knowledge that no net exists and going anyway. This act of faith and love has power. To answer Kerry's query: perhaps not often enough, perhaps too often. Prayers, Susie. This poem is Wonderful.
This was very beautiful.A great prompt.The glitter image behind it was a nice touch.
The title goes perfectly with this piece, with its implied danger and uncertainty.
"Lightheaded from breathing the thin air of trust" - Love this and everything else in your poem. Such an amazing video prompt, too.
Beautiful! Blind faith to spin in glitter and wonder...I hope your daughter's surgery went well~
No net for sure. That's life
Everything about this is soul satisfying! (Sending warm get well soon wishes to Dawn)
Beautiful, Susie. I was happy to hear (read) that your daughter's surgery went well.
Gorgeous little piece, indeed!
glad the surgery went well, Susie. great prompt and video - what a performer. your pen suits the inspiration well. most of the time, there is no net ~
Yes. You pack much into this little piece.
love "the thin air of trust"
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