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Wednesday, December 25, 2013

Noise In A Haiku


christmas is noisy
giggles rattle the rafters
carols out of tune


©Susie Clevenger 2013

My grown daughters are home for Christmas. You would think they are the age they were in the picture. I love the noise. :)

18 comments :

Fireblossom said...

if all haiku were as cool as this one, there would be hope! This made me laugh. I loved it.

Grace said...

How cute they looked ~ Noises from kids are wonderful sounds for me ~ Merry Christmas ~

humbird said...

Very cute! Love this approach with carols~:)x

Robert Bourne said...

this made me smile... lovely write

grapeling said...

sweet, Susie :) ~

steph said...

I love the photo. And the verse. Christmas is a time for noise, and it's all good!

Jim said...

We didn't mind our noisy giggles either, Susie. Our four and a half year old granddaughter is here from London. She had fun golfing today with her new clubs.
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kaykuala said...

That's the beauty of having youngsters around for Christmas. A lot of noise, they having fun and it rubbed on to us too. Nicely Susie!

Hank

Vandana Sharma said...

merry christmas

Bill Nicholls said...

Beautiful, Hope you had a great Christmas Susie

Kerry O'Connor said...

Happy times!
My daughters bemoaned the fact that not so long ago they would have spent Christmas afternoon playing with new Barbies. When they grow up. it's sad for everyone.

Susan said...

Love.

Marian said...

oh the noise! the noise! the noise, noise, noise, noise!
it is freaking LOUD over here.
love to you and your family, Susie. Merry Christmas!

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Susie Swanson said...

Like you, I love the noise small or grown. Merry Christmas my sweet friend.

Kay L. Davies said...

Love this photo, Susie, and carols out of tune...just wonderful.
Luv, K

Mama Zen said...

This is so cute!

Margaret said...

Carols are rarely out of tune at our house … unless I join in. :) It is funny though, I do see their little youthful faces in my mind still…. :) And the noise and the teasing when they all get together …. is crazy :)

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