"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Loneliness,,,,,, sometimes can be very harsh...
A profound and beautiful offering of words in the silence...
Thoughts graffitied is so imaginative an idea.
I think we've all had this experience...at least I know I do it regularly , running over and over the words until I become almost obsessed with the things I WISH I had said, the things I SHOULD have said.I wrote a poem about it that begins:"All my ghosts are friends,Things I should and have not said."
Mental obsession is graffiti, and being alone makes it worse. Love thoughts as moth wings, Susie.
perfect word picture for a desolate existence .....
sad and beautiful.
Powerful, Susie. Flying solo in silence can be a lonely place to be!
Seems we are on the same page today with loneliness and silence.
that poem struck a chord.. great write...
I love the "graffiti thoughts". And resonate with being tired of flying solo, which i have been doing for at least a thousand years :) Loved this, Susie!
Ah, that is why to write, to have a place to not be lonely!
Striking poem with such wonderful use of images. Thanks for posting this.
Lovely, Susie ~~ Yes, Silence is often in solo. I do like to watch graffiti but I am not sure about my own. Seems I never return to my doodles. Probably because I cannot understand them...
the last line really spoke to me as the moth hangs on the lamp tired..
Susie, I love the use of "graffiti" as a verb! This is the solo flight of a soul, incarnate. Sad, filled with regrets, but then, aren't we all there at some point? Amy
Oh, I could relate to this kind of graffiti-powerful!I love "thoughts as moth wings":D
Implied I think, that loneliness can be "the wind beneath our wings" that draws us to the candle flame time and time again... that or in the calm and silence we just might feel the whispers of a passing touch of wings on our ears...
May you find a traveling companion much sooner than later.
Clutching yesterdays' words - nice. I just am stuck with this image.... you did quite well.
This is beautiful, Susie. I especially like graffiti my thoughts.
Beautiful and melancholy wow Susie
Love this wonderful piece!!crystal ball
Love the use of graffiti in this haunting poem.
Ah, yes, I know...
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