"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Just perfect, Susie.
sharing traditions is not a bad thing at all...you made rust have a reminiescence
Could not be said any better! I love your poems-on-images - they make wonderful art cards! Great feast for the eyes for us, too.
Nice take on the prompt:)
Words are powerful and the tongue is full of life. Leave regrets behind and move on. Very good take on the prompt.
Love rust-colored tongue... that says so much and can be interpreted so many ways. Thanks so much for joining in the jam, Susie.
A most interesting take on the prompt ... great haiku!!
Skillfully done Susie--love it.
Good to see you at Poetry Jam. I love short crisp poems like this. Excellent.
oooh... spectacular, Susie - and in next to no words
The rust wash really adds flavor to the wonderful word images. :-) Your tradition is missing an "i"
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