"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
So poignant, Susie...I love the zooming in on those last unopened buds and the ethereal wind pulling life from them...swirling it away with winter. Beautiful writing.
I like the nod to the seasonal change to autumn, but with darker hues such as stripping memories from their stems ~ Beautiful share Susie ~ Thanks for linking up with Sunday's challenge and wishing you happy weekend ~
I'm with you here, wishing it would wait until the flowers have finished, even though autumn is one of my favorite seasons.The others have said it, and I repeat...beautiful, Susie.K
You have evoked the change of seasons with a stark use of imagery. I could feel this in my bones.
Stripping memories from their stems . . . so beautiful. Time waits for no-one.
Oh, Susie - breathtaking. As I get older this is how I feel.
I loved "holding on with open palm." What a lovely piece.
So cool and so meaningful in so short poem. Love the first line about being open, and the image of stripped flower so amazingly sexy even. Here is the real poetry: attractive and soothing...
I also wish the wind would wait ... open to vast interpretation. Lovely poem, Susie.
Breathtaking and so beautiful. Summer's last breath. Love it. hugs,xo
Oh, I know. Even when the chill is on the wind, don't take what I'm not ready to let go of just yet.
Beautiful write, Susie. I love that close.
aw. we are never ready.
Great image to match the art and you know how I feel about sound devices. Love the w's.
"Holding on with open palm to silence..." what a strong opening. This piece is consistent and ends just as brilliantly! Well done
Holding on with open palm—seemingly incongruous, yet it is the only way to approach the blind wind.It always feels premature. I could feel this one in my bones.
nice rhythm in this write, Susie
So lovely - I have been wishing that with fruit - we have berry bushes-- all these unripe berries. Thanks, Susis. K. (This is Manicddaily--wordpress.)
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