"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Oh wow Susie these poems are beautiful! I love the reference to Thor that photo is taken of a tree near a viking site! Wow you are good =)
Good morning Susie, thank you for starting off my morning with this lovely post. Your photos are beautiful and your poem is marvelous. Wishing you a great week!
"The breath of summer." I feel this brush my cheek. fantastic sense and line.
I love it and like I've said before you use words that I don't even know. You are an awesome writer.Hugs.
Oh, Susie... this is such a treat. I especially like the second one.
Both are lovely... The second one is a summer breeze :)
Liked them both...really liked the line..."sent their scent to flirt with June"...Old Grizz
"Flirting with June" is a great line! These were both wonderful haiku! (Better not let Fireblossom see them!)
Beauty of summer and love of clouds described so well:)
the juxtaposition of the two contrasting pieces makes for a lovely piece.
yes, like both of these very much. excellent individual lines and harmony
Beautiful photography and heavenly poems. What could be better?
Love the photo inspiration & the "breath of summer"!
I can sure see how you saw Thor in the first photo, Susie, and the color of that lilac would be too much to resist.Very well done, both of them!K
Lovely Susie, I especially enjoyed the second. Your photos are wonderful as well, of course!
There you are--both the NO and the YES answers from nature/God! I like them both.
Between the lightning andHer sunset pink auraFalls a record high low in summerColdest since records kept past fallLoves blush aware in anticipationOr blind at the height of passion.
Wow Susie! This one is enchanting-I love the photos and the way you guided us with your lovely verse :D
Mother nature can be gentle and rash all in the same season - and each has a special beauty - which you have succinctly captured with these two contrasting poems.
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