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Wednesday, July 31, 2013

Lure of Fishnet

thigh high fishnets lure
tentative to swim closer
to temptation’s edge

sensuality’s
lure sets its hook in the flesh
then reels in the heart



© Susie Clevenger 2013

At Real Toads Peggy had us talking "fish." She let us go wherever our muse took us. Mine was wearing heels and hose. :) 

11 comments :

AJ Neugebauer said...

what a creative take... fantastic work. your words sounds wonderful aloud.

Peggy said...

Love this one. I completely forgot about fishnet stockings! Great take on the prompt. thanks.

Kay L. Davies said...

Wow, girl, you took this to a whole 'nother level. Love it!
K

Marian said...

Rawr! Love it.

Vandana Sharma said...

oh! wow, yes indeed we are all fish lured by temptations...

mindlovemisery said...

What a fantastic take! Love the way your mind works =)

Mama Zen said...

Oh, this is clever! I wish that I had thought of this.

Kalpanaa Misra said...

very creative! Something different. Really enjoyed it :)

Kerry O'Connor said...

What a great metaphor.. very apt.

Sharp Little Pencil said...

You sly thing, going for the sexy images, I loved it! The fishnets never occurred to me - and you know where my mind often rambles...

Creative, great economy of words, and fun read aloud. Brill. Amy

De said...

AWESOME. What a fantastic take on the prompt. Love it.

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