Haiku Heights #266 ~ Time

hands race to erase
life’s moments with obsession
time leaves us unwound

© Susie Clevenger




Comments

Ellecee said…
"time leaves us unwound" and so it can and often does,,, :-) Words of wisdom,Susie,,
Maude Lynn said…
That's really lovely, Susie.
Anonymous said…
I love it, powerful words and so true
Anonymous said…
Indeed!
Lotus said…
Artfully written. This is lovely.
Nanka said…
Only time can tell!! ;)
Vaishali Jain said…
Beautiful, Susie.

Powerful words, these.
Reading Pleasure said…
wonderful, Susan
"Time unwound"...
??? like "one nerve left ????"
My lame attempt at humor...
do like the line.
Peace
Siggi
Anonymous said…
It is hard not to try to pack each moment with activity. But your haiku remind us to take life more leisurely!
Reshma said…
Time does know how to wind us up, loved your take Susie :)
Tigerbrite said…
Erasing life's moments.
Let's hope we remember the good ones:)
Unknown said…
"Hands race to erase". Yes we do wanna erase those moments we wish to. Lovely Susie !!
Maggie Grace said…
Love how you wove your haiku into a kind of riddle/play on words. Really well done!
Sara McNulty said…
Just wonderful use of words, Susie!