"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
"time leaves us unwound" and so it can and often does,,, :-) Words of wisdom,Susie,,
That's really lovely, Susie.
I love it, powerful words and so true
Artfully written. This is lovely.
Only time can tell!! ;)
Beautiful, Susie.Powerful words, these.
"Time unwound"...??? like "one nerve left ????"My lame attempt at humor...do like the line.PeaceSiggi
It is hard not to try to pack each moment with activity. But your haiku remind us to take life more leisurely!
Time does know how to wind us up, loved your take Susie :)
Erasing life's moments.Let's hope we remember the good ones:)
That's exactly how I feel: unwound!Sleeping the Night
"Hands race to erase". Yes we do wanna erase those moments we wish to. Lovely Susie !!
Love how you wove your haiku into a kind of riddle/play on words. Really well done!
Just wonderful use of words, Susie!
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