Sunday, July 21, 2013

Haiku Heights #266 ~ Time

hands race to erase
life’s moments with obsession
time leaves us unwound

© Susie Clevenger




17 comments:

Ellecee said...

"time leaves us unwound" and so it can and often does,,, :-) Words of wisdom,Susie,,

Mama Zen said...

That's really lovely, Susie.

mindlovemisery said...

I love it, powerful words and so true

wordifull.com said...

Indeed!

Porcelain Lotus said...

Artfully written. This is lovely.

Kalpana Solsi said...

Lovely Haiku

Nanka said...

Only time can tell!! ;)

Vaishali Jain said...

Beautiful, Susie.

Powerful words, these.

Reading Pleasure said...

wonderful, Susan

Siggi in Downeast Maine said...

"Time unwound"...
??? like "one nerve left ????"
My lame attempt at humor...
do like the line.
Peace
Siggi

winspiration.me said...

It is hard not to try to pack each moment with activity. But your haiku remind us to take life more leisurely!

Reshma said...

Time does know how to wind us up, loved your take Susie :)

Tigerbrite said...

Erasing life's moments.
Let's hope we remember the good ones:)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

That's exactly how I feel: unwound!

Sleeping the Night

cynthia vincent said...

"Hands race to erase". Yes we do wanna erase those moments we wish to. Lovely Susie !!

Maggie Grace said...

Love how you wove your haiku into a kind of riddle/play on words. Really well done!

Sara McNulty said...

Just wonderful use of words, Susie!