Haiku Heights #264 Swing

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LaTonya Baldwin said…
The image made me think of the actor from Glee and the poem made wish he had held on. Sad weekend.
kaykuala said…
Swinging with a goal in mind! That's interesting. Many can relate to it! Great thoughts Susie!

Hank
Reshma said…
Delightful feeling isn't, aiming for the stars!! Nice one Susie :)
Lolly said…
Oh Susie, this haiku is magical! I am jealous! ;)
Ramesh Sood said…
I liked it very much...somehow I felt we were on the same page...while creating the haiku..

Thanks..

http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/ah-swinging-childhoodhaiku.html#comment-form

RS
Anonymous said…
Such a lovely warming sentiment Susie =)
Nanka said…
Go get it Susie!! You can do it!! Nothing is impossible!! Wonderful thoughts in the haiku!!
Panchali said…
ahh...beautiful Haiku, Susie.
Unknown said…
Susie... beautiful Haiku... loved the way you have enclosed it within the star ....
Heidi said…
it makes me want to take my kids back to the park.
Anonymous said…
Delightful Haiga!! Optimistic and inspirational!! :)
Anonymous said…
Very nice I shared this on twitter :)