"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
I love this.
The image made me think of the actor from Glee and the poem made wish he had held on. Sad weekend.
Swinging with a goal in mind! That's interesting. Many can relate to it! Great thoughts Susie!Hank
Delightful feeling isn't, aiming for the stars!! Nice one Susie :)
Oh Susie, this haiku is magical! I am jealous! ;)
I liked it very much...somehow I felt we were on the same page...while creating the haiku..Thanks..http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/ah-swinging-childhoodhaiku.html#comment-formRS
Such a lovely warming sentiment Susie =)
Go get it Susie!! You can do it!! Nothing is impossible!! Wonderful thoughts in the haiku!!
ahh...beautiful Haiku, Susie.
Susie... beautiful Haiku... loved the way you have enclosed it within the star ....
it makes me want to take my kids back to the park.
Delightful Haiga!! Optimistic and inspirational!! :)
Very nice I shared this on twitter :)
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