"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Haiku Heights #261 ~ Fingerprint
Susie, this simply marvellous. The first one is very poignant.
I love the first one, a unique take on the prompt. I really found this one a difficult prompt for some reason. and the second one...so true..toddlers and their fingerprints in the dust. Or on car windows drawing in the foggy dampnessPeace,Siggi
I have my daughters finger painting drawings and love to see those tiny dots, now that she is an adult!! :)
Oh Susie these are both absolutely exquisite. The first one wow, blew me away and the second one preciousThe new prompt is also up
loved the second one and reminded me of my childhood days
The first is my fav, Susie! Its has deep metaphor meaning that rings! Great! Hank
Wow, the first one is just so neat...and the second one is delightful, Susie :))
Loved your Haiku Susie, the second one is simply adorable :)
Both wonderfully done
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