"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Wednesday, June 5, 2013

Raincoat Sunshine

wearing a raincoat
she dances in bright sunshine
joyful eccentric


©Susie Clevenger




9 comments :

cynthia vincent said...

Hello Susie,
This is the first time I am visiting your blog. Thanks to the common interest we share "HAIKU". Liked this Haiku on Eccentric and Liked your blog too...
Keep blogging !!!

Cynthia Vincent

Susie Clevenger said...

Hi Cynthia, so glad you stopped by and thank you! I do love haiku.

vivinfrance said...

I think she feels the cold.

mindlovemisery said...

Wonderful made me smile!

Reading Pleasure said...

Wonderfully apt haiku

LaTonya Baldwin said...

Needed the sunshine. Rough day yesterday. Someone helped himself to my kindle and wallet.

Susie Clevenger said...

@Vivinfrance, Perhaps she does :)
@mindlovemisery, Thank you. Smiles make the day better!
@Reading Pleasure, thank you!
@LaTonya, I am so sorry. Can't stand a theif!

alicekeysmd said...

sweat under plastic
sun pours down she peels off coat
nothing underneath

Very fun haiku. This is a response poem.:-)
Alice

PS I was living a poem. Now I seem to be living investigative journalism. I'll take poetry any day.

Nanka said...

Made me smile at the strangeness!! :)

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