"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
ah...fingers bruised by liesyes..fantastic!
Thank you rallentanda
It is only a stone, isn't it? ha...so true.And the second...just brilliant.
i am glad i never cared for those stones. thanks for coming by.
These are both wonderful but that second one is beyond amazing!
A varied take on stone and you have done it amazingly!! Whoever said that stone lacks weight or feeling, or expressions, or movement. You have it all there!!
Agree that second haiku is brilliant! Wow.
@Poet Laundry, Thanks so much!@LaTonya, thanks. I was happy to stop by your blog. :)@minlovemisery, Thank you!
@Nanka, thank you so much. I haven't written haiku in a while. It is good to return to it.@Maggie Grace, thank you!
Love the idea of "vanity's display"! And the second haiku represents some challenging thoughts!
Gemma, thank you. It has bee quite a while since I tackled haiku.
Very insightful. Nice job!
Nice one. Glad I read.
I suspect that many of us have bruised fingers!Brick or Stone
These are so brilliantly done
I like both of these but am drawn to the second. casting the first stoneto deflect introspectionfingers bruised by liesMy response poem:the rattle of pebblesknock dark the light of lightbut cannot kill truth
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