"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
"black laced words of misconception" love this line, great poem.
Love the twist you gave this.
Very nice. I love the "black lace misconceptions."
Oh those "black laced words of misconception". Great write, Susie.
sharp! loved it!
LOVED THE WAY YOU HAVE EXPRESSED IT, INSTEAD OF LIFTING COMPLETE TRUST,,,, NICE LINES
I love this and the black lace slap...oooh, so good~
Wonderfully done, Susie. Only a few well-chosen words, but with a lot of punch!K
.. might have to pull this one out of my back pocket someday!!!
Fabulous metaphorical piece. Message intense and nicely wrapped.
Agree with all before me. Such eloquence and singeing (?) of your last line!
I really like the strength of your words here, Susie. I always appreciate someone who says it just as it is.
This is so creative! Smart write, Susie.
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