Wednesday, May 1, 2013

Black Lace of Misconceptions


Mama Zen has given us "unprompted" as our theme for writing. It seems lately I have had many unprompted conversations with narrow minds.




13 comments:

Lisa Williams said...

"black laced words of misconception" love this line, great poem.

Fireblossom said...

Love the twist you gave this.

razzamadazzle said...

Very nice. I love the "black lace misconceptions."

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Oh those "black laced words of misconception". Great write, Susie.

Akila G said...

sharp! loved it!

VaNdAnA ShArMa said...

LOVED THE WAY YOU HAVE EXPRESSED IT, INSTEAD OF LIFTING COMPLETE TRUST,,,, NICE LINES

Ella said...

I love this and the black lace slap...oooh, so good~

Kay L. Davies said...

Wonderfully done, Susie. Only a few well-chosen words, but with a lot of punch!
K

Helen said...

.. might have to pull this one out of my back pocket someday!!!

Kim Nelson said...

Fabulous metaphorical piece. Message intense and nicely wrapped.

Maggie Grace said...

Agree with all before me. Such eloquence and singeing (?) of your last line!

Mary said...

I really like the strength of your words here, Susie. I always appreciate someone who says it just as it is.

Mama Zen said...

This is so creative! Smart write, Susie.