Sunday, November 11, 2012

Love Questions

© Ellen Wilson




Can this single key unleash
heartbreak with one turn,
or will it only tighten
heartstrings to have me yearn
to feel the burn
of cupid’s arrow released?


©Susie Clevenger 2012


8 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Oh, clever question, Susie.

kkkkaty said...

Great job, Susie.

Marian said...

aw :)

Kerry O'Connor said...

I love the flow of these lines. It's hard to work the rhyme, the syllable count and keep the rhythm as smooth as this. Well done, Susie.

hedgewitch said...

One of the eternal questions, I think, and beautifully asked here.

Hannah said...

Nicely done, Susie!! Way to go on the form...a braver soul than I!! Or is it me?! Any way...you're brave! ;)

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Such a great question!

Geraldine said...

The eternal ?? nice one Susie.