"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Wednesday, June 13, 2012

Perhaps If I Burn



This was inspired by Kenia's Wednesday Challenge at Real Toads

15 comments :

Fireblossom said...

I love this, Susie, and I also love the candle light!

Susan said...

Ohhhh. . . . deep sigh . . . .

Marian said...

love it, almost like sending a smoke signal. please notice!

Siggi in Downeast Maine said...

Lovely.
thanks.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine

Sreeja said...

lovely...

Kerry O'Connor said...

Yes, that is very beautiful - a poetic wholeness which I love.

PS.. Such beautiful handwriting as I can only envy!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Whoa! This is fantastic - words and presentation. Wonderful!

Lolamouse said...

Ooh! HOT! I love this! The candle is a great touch too.

Kay L. Davies said...

"Perhaps you will come to me when you see the flame" is just fabulous, Susie. Great presentation, too.
K

Laurie Kolp said...

Lovely, Susie.

Peggy said...

I like this and the presentation as well. Excellent and mysterious response to the prompt!

Mary said...

Beautiful in every way.

Kenia Cris said...

oh! I can so relate, Susie! I tell you I had to find real bravery inside me to step up and text this guy my last poem. I wanted to vomit, and after that I wanted to hide my head in a hole on the ground, I was so embarrassed! But his response was positive after all. I'm glad I did it. :)

Just in case you didn't read it back at IGWRT, I'm so happy you got enough inspiration for two poems. <3 I'm going to the second one now. Kisses dear. :)

Hannah said...

Oh, I hope he comes when he sees the flames!! This is such a lovely presentation, Susie. :)

Ella said...

Beautiful...I love the flames and thoughts that surround your words~
Be still your heart~
You do have gorgeous handwriting! :D

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