"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Wow. Beautiful imagery.. :)
For some reason, this poems holds a bit of mystery for me. Nice flow.
Tanka and picture coalesce.It is a Monet, no wait, it's a Clevenger and a bleepin' good one!:)
This is excellent, Susie. I especially like your use of the word 'puddles' and 'broken'. They add such depth to a short piece.
I love the feel of this, it's beautiful.
awwwww. just beautiful.
What a wonderful poem, and the picture is perfect~night and mystery.
Oh, Susie, this is wonderful~I love the mystery and magic in your journey! :D
Love! Love! Love!
Oh, this is such a rich image you've painted, Susie! So pretty!
Love this tanka -- wonderful imagery!! :)
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