© Mama Zen Photography
Was it honor or madness
that had men going to war?
Armor donned, sword raised,
flesh sliced to drown the grass with blood.
Carnage written in romantic prose,
fair maidens swooned under bloody crowns.
The chessboard of kingdoms
were played with bitter hands.
Power fed on corpses of the dead.
Victory assessed by number of the slain.
Did men dress their madness in honor
to justify the lies burnished upon their chests?
©Susie Clevenger 2012
10 comments:
This is an excellent interpretation of the photo. I thought the third stanza made a very strong point about the misconceptions of what war is really all about.
Wow! I won't highlight the entire poem... I love the whole thing! Mama Zen will be thrilled, I know I am.
Ah, Susie, it all really is a chess board, isn't it? Move, counter-move; and in the end no one really wins! A strong write here!
"Did men dress their madness in honor
to justify the lies burnished upon their chests?" the eternal question and answer all in one.
Memorable imagery!!! I'm impressed with the way you reacted so viscerally to the photo prompt. (Madness or honor? I figure that what starts out as honor ends up as madness...)
You raised a very good question..this is thought provoking poem. Well done Susie ~
Very thought-provoking... I love the reference to chess, Susie.
"....fair maidens swooned under bloody crowns".......I enjoyed this walk back in time........
I fear the answer is - both. You may begin with honor, but the horror and enthrall ent of war is such that, to continue on, or to return, takes madness. An incisive poem.
Its buffoonery most of the time I think....makes me sick to my stomach. I do know that there are times when certain things may be necessary of the greater good of man kind....but that seems rarely to be the case. those cases seem to slip off the radar pretty quickly when there is no prize to be had. Great writing Susie.
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