Deserted ~ Haiku

an ebony night
stars deserted by the moon
shadows walk unseen


©Susie Clevenger 2012

Comments

Unknown said…
Cool haiku. Really like how you incorporated a prevailing image. Darkness/deserted/shadow- very nicely done. Thanks
Preeti S. said…
Eerie and desolate using captivating imagery. Well done. I like it.
Kerry O'Connor said…
Beautiful image in words - I could see the whole night scene so clearly.
Ben Ditty said…
I love reading your poems on here even if I mostly read on Facebook :)
Ellecee said…
I felt myself walking in the darkness too, and darker still when you use the word "ebony". A special haiku.
Anonymous said…
Love the imagery, Susie!! :)
Ed Pilolla said…
one of my favorite haikus you have written, separate images brought together as one, from the sky to the street.