she waited in red
a breathing valentine heart
summoned there by fate
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temptation or fate
life played like a game of chess
seeking upper hand
fate dealt alice hearts
it was no sweet sentiment
just an evil queen
©Susie Clevenger 2012
Haiku Heights #109 ~ Fate
1st Photograph: duitang.com
2nd Photograph: myspace.com
3rd Photograph: favim
1st Photograph: duitang.com
2nd Photograph: myspace.com
3rd Photograph: favim
15 comments:
What a triple treat...I like the twist and turn of fate ~
Have a good day ~
Love the set -- the first one is my favorite!!
oo nice...the hearts dealt by fate are not always the kindest for sure...
Life is somewhat a game of chess, very true.
the first one is superb, the lady in red exactly corresponding to your words..:)
These are excellently done, especially the last one.
Lovely, Susie... especially:
fate dealt alice hearts
it was no sweet sentiment
just an evil queen
Love it.
wonderful words! loved them all, especially the first one. tres romantic too!!!
I am added you to my followed blogs today too. great blog!
Great. Reminded me of the Queen of Hearts in Alice in Wonderland.
Fate does some weird things, for sure!
Fate Has Blessed Them
Such smart haiku, Susie; you have talent. Having just discovered this site, I may link up soon..
gorgeous.
suspenseful.
ironic.
enjoyed the entire set. and i liked the colour red. :)
A very nice tale you've painted here. Love it!
This is a well composed set of haiku Susie. Thank you for sharing
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