"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Or reaching still for the unattainable? Some see life the same way...
I like this in its simplicity and yet not...Sometimes when we dip an idea and then lift it up; we think we get it- If we wait a few breathsit changes-( stone of dreams,mortality's skeleton) Thanks for visiting.
Your time waiting to do the prompt was well worth it Susie! This is a truly thought provoking poem....I love it!!
Hoarding = greed .. never good. Your Mag however is quite good!
Wonderful. The last two lines knock it right out of the ballpark.
Mortality's skeleton.I am enjoying thinking about the implications of that...=)
I like that your poem left me with the feeling of more being out there than life and death. Thank you for sharing your stone of dreams, Susie.
i like the rawness of this...the uncut ruby held in eternity’s hands...and mortality's skeleton...great images..
Nice take on the heart as an uncut ruby held in eternity's hands ~
ugh...we can not take it with us...an intersting thought if our graves were marked with what we really clung to...would be intersting to see...
Beautiful job on this! I really should pay more attention to the prompts! Lovely stuff keeps happening with them! (sigh)@AudreyHowitt
talented write,you rock.
You transform the ghoulish image into a prayer--nicely done.
What a wonderful take on the prompt.
a ghostly photo and message. nicely done, susie!
Stone of dreams horded to buy life...powerfully thought provoking...
Raw and nicely penned !
Well done Susie, as one of the other commenters says you make a prayer of this picture.Really good one.Namaste
*eternity's hand*I love that.....The Collage Pirate
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