the melting winter
waters sleeping daffodils
spring rocks the cradle
robin melody
nature sings the song of spring
winter breathes a sigh
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with their delicate perfume
the bouquet of spring
©Susie Clevenger 2012
1st Photograph: Favim
2nd Photograph: Anne Cook
3rd Photograph: Photobucket
Real Toads Haiku
11 comments:
Ah, spring...it's my favorite time of year and you described it so beautifully...love these haiku.
Each is a promise of scents and sounds to come. Very well done.
Oh, you set the bar high! I haven't written mine yet. These are beautiful!
Oh, these all rock, but I really love the first one! Wow! Great images to go with them too.
(Oh, and I just love your blog name, lol)
Susie, these are so beautiful.......I especially love the robin poem.
Oh your beautiful haiku and photos give me spring fever
mmmmmm....lilacs. The olfactory ones get me everytime. The challenge embraced you today.
Very well done ~
I love the nature touches in your words ~
Very nice!
My only quibble, because I am no fun whatsoever, is that your lilac haiku lacked a cut or juxtaposition (to my biased eyes).
Your delicate verses perfectly evoke the implacable spring!
Awesome!
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