Friday, February 10, 2012

The Haiku Challenge Day #11 ~ The Gift of Sight


i see with your eyes
a gift when life said goodbye
thank you seems so small

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brown eyes with blue sight
the veil of darkness removed
her gift humbling him

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a simple checkmark
priceless statement of intent
blind eyes now have sight


©Susie Clevenger 2012
 29 Days of 29 Haiku #11: Paint the Image

9 comments:

Lolamouse said...

Beautiful, just beautiful.

Grace said...

A lovely gift to share ~

I checked mine many years ago ~

Chèvrefeuille said...

Wow! Susie this haiku set is really based on the image.

Pranali Kadam said...

'a simple checkmark
priceless statement of intent
blind eyes now have sight'

And rest said before,everything comes alive.
Nice set. :)

becca givens said...

My oh my -- great set ... and I agree the gift of sight is a treasure and a legacy! Thank you for sharing ~~

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I can't imagine living in darkness...


A Painted Image

Amber said...

Just WOW! Perfectly describes the image. <3

Abby said...

What a gift--sight! Your words a stunning!

Someone is Special said...

blind eyes now have sight! Beautiful Susie!

Someone is Special