my world turned yellow
with fluttering butterflies
joy arrived on wings
the sunshine of butterflies
joy arrived on wings
with fluttering butterflies
my world turned yellow
©Susie Clevenger 2012
Image: popularscreensaver.com
29 days of 29 Haiku prompt: colors
Poetry Form: Naisaiku
12 comments:
O how delightful! Adore the words ... sunshine of butterflies!
"Joy arrive on wings" - love it!
This is really pretty!
Butterflies are indeed joyful! Lovely!
I love the mirroring. Lovely haiku.
I like the sunshine in your words...beautiful picture too ~
Grace
Loved it..Butterflies!!..I love them....Thanks for writing on butterflies...
I feel like I am flitting about ... I love butterflies ... they flit and flutter and float! Great image to pair with your uplifting words!
Butterflies, and yellow... right up my street!!!
Nicely!
Butterflies are so lively and positive! I love them!
And they do bring joy!
I loved the line "joy arrived on wings"! Really nice! :)
Thanks to all of you for your kind words...I am so in love with butterflies.
Delightful Haiku Susie.. Loved it so much..
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