TipToe


i wait on tiptoes
as I watch the sun rising
my day of dreams
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the dance of secrets
a shadow walk on tiptoe
discovery waits

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love’s tiptoe vigil
waiting for a matching heart
doubt has no foothold


©Susie Clevenger 2012
Photographs: Favim

Comments

anthonynorth said…
All of them are beautifully done.
Grace said…
beautiful tiptoe haiku...i like that doubt has no foothold ~
carol l mckenna said…
Very beautiful post ~ visual and words ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/HMH
Fireblossom said…
I enjoyed this so much that I didn't even realize it was the hated (by me) haiku, until I saw the tag. Wonderful combination of beautiful images and gentle words... the perfect combination for a weekend morning!
Hello Susie, I love these haiku and those pictures ... wonderful.
Teresa said…
These are all wonderful! I really enjoyed the first best.
The tiptoe vigil can sometimes be a lonely one...

Shadowy Path
Susie Clevenger said…
I thank each of you for your wonderful comments.@.Fireblossom so thankful you enjoyed the "hated" haiku :)
My favorite is the second. Wonderful imagery.
Anonymous said…
lovely

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Hazel said…
Beautiful! All three. Love the second one best - dance of secrets. That's magical to me.
Ruchi Jain said…
very well written haiku and pictures are so enchanting.
MyWordsWhisper said…
I love your use of pictures with your wonderful Haiku!
becca givens said…
you never fail to disappoint! lovely set of tip toeing!
Blossom Vydrina said…
these are lovely, and excellent photos matched up