Warm days huddle on the calendar gathering their strength
as summer weeps that it must say goodbye.
Ribbon water curls in blue question marks
asking autumn its time of arrival.
An exodus of feathered wings
waits for the call
to take flight
towards the
sun.
©Susie Clevenger 2012
Image: The Lonely Cry-Ken Simm
Inspired by the photographic art of
Ken Simm for Real Toads
19 comments:
I love the shape of these words - the migratory V-shaped skein of geese has been realized so well, and summer weeping to see them go.
Thank you Kerry
Well put!!! Have a grand day! Cathy
Beautifully pure and I like the concrete edge.
I love the poem.. you are a very talented poet.. I will be your new follower.. I found you via Monika..Susie
This fits my image perfectly. An evocative write.
Thank you GrandmaK
Thank you Titus
Thank you so much Susie for your kind words and for following my blog.
Thank you Ken for your kind words and your beautiful image.
Ribbon water. My, this is lovely.
Thank you Mary Ann
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""Warm days huddle on the calendar gathering their strength""
what fine imagery!
Beautiful! Wonderful capture of the change of seasons.
Wow! This is really pretty!
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lovely. the concrete style adds a layer - as though we're looking at the landscape, appealing to the seasons, with birdlike familiarity, from the perspective of the flock.
Thank you so much Shawnacy
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