"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Ok- We were challenged by Fireblossom at Real Toads to show our inner animals.
Foolish mistake indeed, Susie. Very well said.K
Such a painful rending of the family is best described in animal terms. I felt the emotions of this poem.
The last line leaves a frightened sense of mind. But a person betraying love and care no longer deserves the same affection, right!
Bet nobody chooses a seahorse - it's the Daddies who guard their young!♥
Susie,Strong feelings = strong write!Sometimes it is necessary to show one's claws.
Wow! I enjoyed how you developed the poem and sprung the climax.
Wow, I'm scared...lolYou did a great job~ Now, I'm rethinking my choice~
oh, MAN. what a mistake, a lion cub? or a bear cub for that matter? stupid, arrogant choice. thanks for sharing, susie. whoosh.
i think that is (should be) applicable to all mothers...no, make that to all parents. the feelings in your poem are so palpable...
This is really powerful! Such a biting warning growl. Great poem!
Thank you Kay...
Never underestimate the Mother ~Nice write of the wild ~
Thank you Kerry...there is no pain like the pain of a hurt child...
Monika..I so agree
RAWR! Fools don't survive long in the wild. I loved this, Susie. Thanks for being part of my prompt!
Bet they don't either Jinksy
Thanks Mary..there are times that just call for claws!
Thank you Doctor FTSE...I am patient :)
Thanks Ella..I can be fierce when I need to.
Thanks Lilly..it has been hard to see my girls..yes plural..hurt
Thanks Shen...I needed to show my teeth
Thanks Shay..I may have had a bit too much fun with your prompt..lol
Nothing more powerful than a mother's warrior heart. Way to be, kiddo!
Thank you Sherry!
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