"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
You captured the chaos perfectly.
first stanza is great
Ooh, love the first line, especially. Terrific.
Ouch. Nothing hurts more than words said in anger. I don't like the pic either.This hits home!
Angry words would make this a messy painting ~ Happy day ~
there is a lot of discord here.
elegant imagery, lovely words.smiles.
You are tight with your comment on my post. This is rather sad but nicely penned though. I have thought of something scarry and sad too at first but I opted to make it fun instead... JJRod'z
And btw, yehey!.. Made it a 100 follower.... JJRod'z
There is much unhappiness in your poem. Painfully well expressed. Thank you for sharing.
I saw this painting as chaotic as well. A great haiku.
I love the last stanza, so very true. Discord does paint with a chaotic brush.K
Excellent capture, especially the last three lines:"...discord paints withchaotic brush"
ah those words certainly can boomerang back on you...and chaos certainly paints it...nice susie...
Whow is this "Discord" person who thinks it is ok to use ranting boomerangs to vent their anger??? Let me at um!!Wander
Anger certainly boomerangs. Nice one.
You painted a strong image, too...
Well done. :)
It was right in front of me and I have to agree with Jinksy.
i like the boomerangs through the static airiron mased fighter
Excellent haiku!Anna :o]
You certainly ‘saw red’ in this. I could feel the rage bubbling through!
Oh I love it. I looked at this picture for quite some time and checked away mine as rubbish. You have captured it.
Short and to the point.It works!=)
Perfect! I also felt the picture was very chaotic.
Love how many Magpie poems focused on the 'boomerang' interpretation .. I did too as I couldn't see anything else. In the eye of the beholder as they say.
That brush'll get you every time. Good piece!
It's true that words can boomerang, to wound...
Can't argue with chaotic brushes...
So much truth here Susie....beautiful writing! :-)
Finally got through - I've tried to get to your Mags this year and failed - either couldn't get your post to open at all, or couldn't get your blog to open ... your poem sums up my frustration perfectly!Best wishes Isabel
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