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Thursday, December 22, 2011

Spirit


she’s a free spirit
unbound by conventional
freedom her music

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a joyful spirit
adversities nemesis
shines bright in darkness

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loneliness retreats
when friendship holds out its hand
a spirit of love


©Susie Clevenger 2011

Sensational Haiku Wednesday Prompt: Spirit

25 comments :

anthonynorth said...

You got into the spirit with those. nicely done.

Ben Ditty said...

Oo I'm feeling like this could be the premise of a romantic film. Nice.

G-Man said...

Susie....
All lovely Haikus
You Rock!!

mylittlewordz said...

Great set of haikus. I like the use of 'nemesis' in the second one.

Jamie

Sheila Moore said...

beautiful.

Denise Moncrief said...

This is a lovely collection of senryu with spirit as a common thread. Nicely said in few words.

Susie Clevenger said...

Thank you Anthony

Susie Clevenger said...

Thank you Ben...I was certainly feeling a spirit of love when I wrote them

Susie Clevenger said...

@G-Man Thank you! @mylittlwordz Thank you so much Jamie @Sheila Thanks :) @Thank you Denise I tend to write more senryu than haiku

Morning said...

love it,
wow.

booguloo said...

Beautiful work.

zongrik said...

these were so tender bravo

Susie Clevenger said...

Thank you Morning

Susie Clevenger said...

Thank you boogulu

Susie Clevenger said...

Thank you Zongrik

Kay said...

Just wonderful, Susie! Takes my breath away.

rebecca said...

dear susie,

forgive me for my late arrival. i posted haiku my heart and answered every one posted before i was called unexpectedly out of town.
your haiku here is amazingly beautiful, and infused with love.
so glad to finally arrive and drink deeply of your generosity.

Jazzbumpa said...

These are very sweet.

Cheers!

JzB

Susie Clevenger said...

Thank you Kay...

Susie Clevenger said...

Thank you so much Rebecca..

Susie Clevenger said...

Thank you Jazz

Beyond Horizon said...

unbound by conventional freedom, very nice..spirit thats where the magic lies :)

Susie Clevenger said...

Thank you Beyond Horizon

beccagivens said...

Beautiful set ~~ Happy New Year!!

Susie Clevenger said...

Thank you Becca...Happy New Year!!

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