Thursday, December 8, 2011

Space


the space between us
was a valley of distrust
my heart could not cross

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he asked for his space
his bags now sit on the porch
i changed the door locks

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a stack of papers
please initial the last line
his space now granted


©Susie Clevenger 2011
 Photographs: Photobucket
Haiku Height Prompt: #97- Space

10 comments:

Ruchi Jain said...

Deep presentation of a tale in haiku....

Janet said...

How can something so sad be so...beautiful?

Mama Zen said...

Fabulous take on the prompt! I wouldn't have thought of that.

Ben Ditty said...

Aw, divorce is such a sad thing :(

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

very sad yet 3 of them together made a good story.

beccagivens said...

Although, the pain of Divorce is something I can relate to ... I really like your presentation and it gave me a wry chuckle! :-)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Very moving Haiku. Sad but beautiful.


Melanie

Grace said...

Nice space haiku set...Very creative story telling ~

Tigerbrite said...

Nice post. Well done.

The Purple said...

Excellent!
Happy Holidays….
I know you write stunning Haiku, welcome sharing with us,
1 to 3 or more are welcome.
no theme.
Hope to see you in,
Smiles!