the space between us
was a valley of distrust
my heart could not cross
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he asked for his space
his bags now sit on the porch
i changed the door locks
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a stack of papers
please initial the last line
his space now granted
©Susie Clevenger 2011
10 comments:
Deep presentation of a tale in haiku....
How can something so sad be so...beautiful?
Fabulous take on the prompt! I wouldn't have thought of that.
Aw, divorce is such a sad thing :(
very sad yet 3 of them together made a good story.
Although, the pain of Divorce is something I can relate to ... I really like your presentation and it gave me a wry chuckle! :-)
Very moving Haiku. Sad but beautiful.
Melanie
Nice space haiku set...Very creative story telling ~
Nice post. Well done.
Excellent!
Happy Holidays….
I know you write stunning Haiku, welcome sharing with us,
1 to 3 or more are welcome.
no theme.
Hope to see you in,
Smiles!
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