"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Brilliant!To fit in, we divide ourselves so much that we forget the 'Me' in us.
Great imagery with division making whole. It's like a math problem. For life :p
ohh yet again a lovely written piece...your words took me back to one of my old poem..which I had based on same line of thoughts... :) very mesmerising...love-Jyo :)
yuk! I hate being in that place and try so hard to stay out of it. I wrote a poem this week about squandering serenity and someone asked me how that would happen. Your poem explains it precisely!
So true! I love everything about this, from the words to the length and universality. Excellent piece!
This reminds me of a poem I wrote called "Hours," check it out on my poetry blog. Would appreciate feedback if you get the chance. Nice poems!Erick Flores
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