My heart feels
your words
kiss me in the wind.
I cannot
release my soul
from your memory.
Between each
of my heartbeats
there is a lonely space.
Your name
rests on my lips.
I won’t speak goodbye.
©Susie Clevenger 2011
13 comments:
this leaves me speechless! Breath-taking and stunning in its sadness!
Thank you Janet
Oh my heart just stopped for a moment, such beautiful writing Susie, Merry Christmas to you and your family and may all your 2012 dreams come true XX
Thank you Jen...Merry Christmas to you and your family also. May 2012 be a blessed year for you.
Absolutely chilling and sad. Awesome.
Tim
Such a great sense of curiosity takes me with your words. I guess the reader always wonders at the author's inspiration and appreciates in a way not knowing, because it lets them imagine.
"Your name rests on my lips." Breathtaking words that takes you on an emotional journey. Great Poem!
So beautiful and poignant.
Thank you Tim...letting go is so painful
Thanks Ben...seems in this year of saying goodbye to so many I just felt this one
Thank you Anthony
Thank you Sherry...
Greetings:
Happy Happy New Year.
Appreciated your support of 2011,
Best Wishes for the year of 2012…
Your contribution is always welcome!
Lots of blessings and cheers sending your way.
See you soon.
xoxox
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