Unopened


love notes unanswered
yellow pages gather dust
mystery remains



©Susie Clevenger

Comments

anthonynorth said…
This was poignant. excellent.
Anonymous said…
yes, who did write those love notes?
Beautiful Susie...

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dsnake1 said…
what secrets do those pages hold?
i like your use of "yellow pages", it gives a sense of age and time (or timelessness).
lovely work!
Anonymous said…
Greater mystery .... are they unopened love notes?

:-)
Your haiku was a perfect and complete story. Like it!
Nanka said…
You created such a wonderful mystery here!! The curiosity is killing!! :D
Ramesh Sood said…
Just superb... I recall my post on 'Notebook' prompt on OSI...preserve these lovenotes well..not everyone will understand and interpret them with heart and soul..
let it remain a mystery.. I love that thought u portrayed.
Anonymous said…
I love the mysteriousness of it. Lovely.
Unknown said…
Great haiku and the photo to go with it. Nice job.
Excellent Haiku. Wonder what is in those love letters.


Melanie
Ruchi Jain said…
This is a true mystery...
Anonymous said…
This really captures "mystery"--love it!
There's nothing more mysterious than an opened letter of any kind--which is why I just can't bear to leave envelopes unopened!

Sunflower Mystery
:) and some love notes are better left unopened... :)
:) and some love notes are better left unopened... :)