drying dead roses
as haunting as your absence
love’s bloom now ashen
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a single tear fell
grief for only a moment
i will not miss you
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appetite suppressed
now lonely dining for one
your absence consuming
©Susie Clevenger 2011
Sensational Haiku Wednesday Prompt: Absence
11 comments:
Poignant words.
Love the first one. Well done!
Wow ... what a set!! Well done!
"i will not miss you" its so difficult to say.
Loved the last lines
i like the contrast in i will not miss you and your absence is consuming...def felt this before...
Very well done sweetie!
so sad
somehow sweet and defiant.
A study in absence! Well done!
You have showed great perseverance behind the blog. It's been enriched since the beginning. I love to share to with my friends. Carry on.
Hello, I simply wanted to take time to make a comment and say I have really enjoyed reading your site.
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