"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Short and to the point like a cold text with no voice. Nice piece.You may want to fix the link that you used on the PU site for this post. The current link leads to your post "Betrayal".:)
Terrific use of dual haiku to create a cohesive story. The value of each word rings through here. Nice!
Powerful and a sad truth about the world we live in today.
Really nicely done, and a very good onservation.
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