worded oblivion


surrounded by life
technology eclipses
response to human contact

text messages replace
the sound of another’s voice
 in worded oblivion


©Susie Clevenger 2011
Photo Prompt Poets United

Comments

Short and to the point like a cold text with no voice. Nice piece.

You may want to fix the link that you used on the PU site for this post. The current link leads to your post "Betrayal".

:)
Unknown said…
Terrific use of dual haiku to create a cohesive story. The value of each word rings through here. Nice!
Laurie Kolp said…
Powerful and a sad truth about the world we live in today.
Susannah said…
Really nicely done, and a very good onservation.