White Feather


a white feather fell
when an angel lost its wings
heaven’s in mourning


©Susie Clevenger
Height of Haiku Challenge
September-30 Haikus in 30 Days
Prompt Day 20: Feather



Comments

Saras said…
Very nice take on the prompt!
Ramesh Sood said…
This is very touching..well thoughtout..
Lovely, touching. Like it.
Ron. said…
I struggled with this prompt. You nailed it. Bella.
Nanka said…
Nice one for the prompt!!
knot2share said…
I liked it! And what a good picture to go with it...which one came first - picture or haiku?
Scarlet said…
a sad one...beautiful picture ~
A little song of loss--and we all sing them...

Featherless Pomegranate
Anonymous said…
A great haiku Susie.
Angels losing feathers -heaven in mourning, great image
i liked this one the most of the very few that i have read in your blog.... :) hope to read the archives soon :)