"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Monday, September 19, 2011

White Feather


a white feather fell
when an angel lost its wings
heaven’s in mourning


©Susie Clevenger
Height of Haiku Challenge
September-30 Haikus in 30 Days
Prompt Day 20: Feather



15 comments :

Saras said...

Very nice take on the prompt!

Kim Nelson said...

Perfect

Christine said...

beautiful

Ed Pilolla said...

i like it:)

Ramesh Sood said...

This is very touching..well thoughtout..

Judith Westerfield said...

Lovely, touching. Like it.

andy sewina said...

Lovely!

Ron. said...

I struggled with this prompt. You nailed it. Bella.

Nanka said...

Nice one for the prompt!!

knot2share said...

I liked it! And what a good picture to go with it...which one came first - picture or haiku?

Heaven said...

a sad one...beautiful picture ~

Morning said...

brilliant.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

A little song of loss--and we all sing them...

Featherless Pomegranate

mjshorts said...

A great haiku Susie.
Angels losing feathers -heaven in mourning, great image

JaLpArI - tHe MeRmAiD said...

i liked this one the most of the very few that i have read in your blog.... :) hope to read the archives soon :)

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