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Thursday, September 1, 2011

Secrets~Senryu


secrets were sleeping
inquisitive’s alarm clock
awakened the past



©Susie Clevenger 2011
Height of Haiku Challenge
September- 30 haikus in 30 days
Prompt day 4: any topic
My choice: Secrets

 

9 comments :

Grace said...

love the creativity here ~

you are ahead in this challenge

great pieces ~

judithwesterfield said...

This is wonderful. Truly

Ron. said...

Very cool. Let in the light.

mjshorts said...

What a great senryu (still need to get my head around the difference between senryu & haiku)
Very clever use of words especially the idea of inquisitive's alarm clock awakening the past.
Thanks for a great read.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Lovely Haiku. It brings back happy memories of my sister and I. Well done my friend


Melanie

Tarang Sinha said...

Nice haiku and cute picture:)

Leo said...

different ending.. i hope the sad past stays sleeping :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Yeah, old Inquisitive just doesn't know when to leave well enough alone!

Day 4: Corn in the Wash

Susie Clevenger said...

Leo..love your haiku for flourish...what beautiful gardens we can have with the weeds gone...for some reason I still can't scroll down the page... :(

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