Secrets~Senryu


secrets were sleeping
inquisitive’s alarm clock
awakened the past



©Susie Clevenger 2011
Height of Haiku Challenge
September- 30 haikus in 30 days
Prompt day 4: any topic
My choice: Secrets

 

Comments

Grace said…
love the creativity here ~

you are ahead in this challenge

great pieces ~
Ron. said…
Very cool. Let in the light.
Anonymous said…
What a great senryu (still need to get my head around the difference between senryu & haiku)
Very clever use of words especially the idea of inquisitive's alarm clock awakening the past.
Thanks for a great read.
Lovely Haiku. It brings back happy memories of my sister and I. Well done my friend


Melanie
Tarang Sinha said…
Nice haiku and cute picture:)
Vinay Leo R. said…
different ending.. i hope the sad past stays sleeping :)
Yeah, old Inquisitive just doesn't know when to leave well enough alone!

Day 4: Corn in the Wash
Susie Clevenger said…
Leo..love your haiku for flourish...what beautiful gardens we can have with the weeds gone...for some reason I still can't scroll down the page... :(