Sunday, September 25, 2011

Reborn From Ashes


the phoenix legend
personified in my child
reborn from ashes


©Susie Clevenger 2011
Height of Haiku Challenge
September-30 Haikus in 30 Days
Prompt Day 26: Phoenix


 

10 comments:

JaLpArI - tHe MeRmAiD said...

THIS is the spirit of life...
to rise back.. again and again...

hope things go well with your gals susie....
"That dont kill me can only make me stronger.."

miss pie said...

a wonderful life to hang on to....

Ramesh Sood said...

Trust me, I have experienced it twice.. and go by what ... MeRmAid says here.. " That don't kill me can only make me stronger.." beautiful..

Ron. said...

Children as our risen selves; resurrected, yet reborn anew. Great concept. Well done.

andy sewina said...

Yeah, well told!

mjshorts said...

A lovely Haiku Susie.
Having children and watching them grow has to be one of life's greatest times.

Nanka said...

Heartening for a mom to know that her child rises again to expectations!!

Mama Zen said...

Beautiful!

Traci B said...

Fantastic take on the prompt, Susie. A hopeful haiku. :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Rebirth can be a fiery experience!

Can you see a phoenix here or here?