Friday, September 23, 2011

Lost To Winter Snow



the trees stood undressed
final glory of autumn
lost to winter snow


©Susie Clevenger 2011
Height of Haiku Challenge
September-30 Haikus in 30 Days
Prompt Day 25: Lost


15 comments:

The Noiseless cuckooclock said...

smart one.
;)

wordcoaster said...

The trees around here are still clothed, but pretty soon winter will start her wardrobe change. Nice one :)

JaLpArI - tHe MeRmAiD said...

i was reading Keats' 'To Autumn'.... just a few minutes back....

i must say, ur haiku is a gr8 ode to his poem. :)

vivinfrance said...

Lovely, lovely haiku. I'm not quite so happy at the thought of snow so soon!

Grace said...

Lovely picture.. though I am not quite ready for winter snow ~

Gemma Wiseman said...

Such a beautiful, yearning sadness in these thoughts!

Ron. said...

HOT

judith Westerfield said...

A tree stood undressed -- that's an incredible line. It absolutely captures the image. Marvelosity!

Nanka said...

Beautiful expression of the changing pattern in nature!!

knot2share said...

I loved this interpretation!

Jinksy said...

Beautiful marriage of haiku and image...

mjshorts said...

A lovely Haiku susie.
Lovely image of 'undressed trees'.

kaykuala said...

It finally did come. Winter is around the corner!

Hank

andy sewina said...

Clever stuff!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

This is a kind of lostness that I celebrate: the transition from autumn to winter.

Lost Things here and here