Tuesday, September 6, 2011

Hypnotic Metaphors~senryu


i read your verses
their hypnotic metaphors
seducing my heart


©Susie Clevenger 2011
Height of Haiku Challenge
September-30 Haikus in 30 days
Prompt Day 7: Hypnotic


15 comments:

UmamaheswariAnandane said...

True True..I can understand :)

Gemma Wiseman said...

How hypnotic the sound and sense of words can be!

knot2share said...

oh wow! that is a good one. I loved your haiku on KISS too....ironic act of love. Keep safe all of you.

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Hypnotic metaphors WoW!

Grace said...

I like that seduction bit...nice~

beccagivens said...

Hmmmm!!! Great one - with a perfect image to accompany it!!

vivinfrance said...

nice form of seduction

Ron. said...

Your verse has the same effect on me that you're writing about here. Well done!

Nanka said...

Words can have that effect to melt the heart!!

mjshorts said...

A wonderful senryu.
I love the image of hypnotic metaphors.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Sweet seduction under hypnosis!


Hypnotic Meadow

Saras said...

Very Nice one!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Oh this is excellent. Love the print.


Melanie

iblogmoore (Amanda Moore) said...

steamy, sultry loved this!

Leo said...

showcases the power of words :) beautifully written.