Hypnotic Metaphors~senryu


i read your verses
their hypnotic metaphors
seducing my heart


©Susie Clevenger 2011
Height of Haiku Challenge
September-30 Haikus in 30 days
Prompt Day 7: Hypnotic


Comments

Uma Anandane said…
True True..I can understand :)
Gemma Wiseman said…
How hypnotic the sound and sense of words can be!
knot2share said…
oh wow! that is a good one. I loved your haiku on KISS too....ironic act of love. Keep safe all of you.
Andy Sewina said…
Hypnotic metaphors WoW!
Grace said…
I like that seduction bit...nice~
Anonymous said…
Hmmmm!!! Great one - with a perfect image to accompany it!!
vivinfrance said…
nice form of seduction
Ron. said…
Your verse has the same effect on me that you're writing about here. Well done!
Nanka said…
Words can have that effect to melt the heart!!
Anonymous said…
A wonderful senryu.
I love the image of hypnotic metaphors.
Oh this is excellent. Love the print.


Melanie
Anonymous said…
steamy, sultry loved this!
Vinay Leo R. said…
showcases the power of words :) beautifully written.