how dare the moon shine
when it is hidden in clouds
i long for its light
the night is too dark
i am feeling forsaken
my friend evades me
moonbeams my nightlight
they shine the path to my dreams
now I toss and turn
dear moon come to me
chase away your cloud blanket
shine for me again
©Susie Clevenger 2011
11 comments:
that moon can be a tart:)
The Moon doesn't listen to anybody!
This is really wonderful and I really like your images.
I like dark moonless nights.....
lovely lunar Ode I enjoyed this it is is quite original.
creative callout to the moon! i liked it =)
A night is lovelier when the moon is shining. I love these haikus. Moonbeams can lull one to sleep and it's bright morning here (gotta go to work in a bit).
moonbeams my nightlight
Great image!!
sadly romantic.... :_)
but heyyyy....the image of moon shining behind the clouds reminds me more of the horror movies... *scaryyyy*
I love reading your work. As always well done!
Super haiku - really enjoyed the lunar lament :)
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