Wednesday, September 28, 2011

How Dare the Moon



how dare the moon shine
when it is hidden in clouds
i long for its light

the night is too dark
i am feeling forsaken
my friend evades me

moonbeams my nightlight
they shine the path to my dreams
now I toss and turn

dear moon come to me
chase away your cloud blanket
shine for me again

©Susie Clevenger 2011



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11 comments:

Ed Pilolla said...

that moon can be a tart:)

G-Man said...

The Moon doesn't listen to anybody!

colorpoems said...

This is really wonderful and I really like your images.

Ria said...

I like dark moonless nights.....

iblogmoore (Amanda Moore) said...

lovely lunar Ode I enjoyed this it is is quite original.

Tara Tyler said...

creative callout to the moon! i liked it =)

Hazel said...

A night is lovelier when the moon is shining. I love these haikus. Moonbeams can lull one to sleep and it's bright morning here (gotta go to work in a bit).

beccagivens said...

moonbeams my nightlight

Great image!!

JaLpArI - tHe MeRmAiD said...

sadly romantic.... :_)

but heyyyy....the image of moon shining behind the clouds reminds me more of the horror movies... *scaryyyy*

ShonEjai said...

I love reading your work. As always well done!

Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog? said...

Super haiku - really enjoyed the lunar lament :)