"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Secrets..how we keep them ~
Phew, that's a tough call!Nicely!!
You haiku is very powerful. Great job! I love it!
Hidden love - very sad.InspiredbyLisa
Such love ... dare to be spoken!! Tough ~~ nicely done!
why do we all try to hide the love??
Solid senryu; greatly enjoyed. Seems we're on the same wavelength on this prompt.
I like the way you said it...
A slip betwixt tongue and lip?? Don't bite it hard for sooner or later it has to come out!!
A beautiful senryu.So much captured in so few words.
An impossible task?Hidden things here and here and here
this is so original my heart kinda dropped after I read this, it's terrific!
ah. but will heart support lips and tongue?
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