"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Saturday, September 24, 2011

Heart Notes


music claimed my heart
it heard the loneliness there
and filled it with notes



©Susie Clevenger 2011
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13 comments :

Ed Pilolla said...

this is a little enchanting. i like its energy, especially with the art. you know, those notes are nice and small and do look more like ornate design than notes, so i think its great. you really do tight, cohesive packages very well with text and art:)

poetry-diary.com said...

Wonderfully optimistic! And I know music can do this.

JaLpArI - tHe MeRmAiD said...

music is that which can erase our loneliness and also make us feel lonely in a big crowd....
music is powerful....
so are ur words.. :)

Leonora Sophie said...

this is a very special haiku!
'enchanting' is the word! lovely!

Saras said...

Beautiful picture and exquisite lines of Haiku.

vivinfrance said...

Music, the food of love, makes a lovely senryu.

Ron. said...

Unique artwork, enhanced by very fine writing. congratulations.

Nanka said...

Beautiful and the picture well compliments your words!! Like the feeling of heart being filled with a symphony!!

mjshorts said...

I love the idea of musical notes filling the gap left by loneliness/
A great read Susie.

The Cello Strings said...

charming, love it.

andy sewina said...

Wonderful, the way music can hit the spot!

Morning said...

music claims many hearts,

love the way you convey your emotions.
stunning one.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

How kind of the music! How blessed you are!

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