"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Just saw this pop up on my feed for your poetry page, and was happy to see you posted here. Perfect haiku for this Adam and Eve prompt.'adam's rib took the first bite'Indeed!! :-)
So beautiful, my attention was caught by poignant description of sin's introduction. Well-done! :-)Irenehttp://softvoiceofafreespirit.blogspot.com/2011/08/birth-of-sin.html
Very cleverly written for prompt!!:-)
nice and brief. I love it
lovely, have fun!
Maybe next time she should let him take more bites...well written
very poignant..nice one
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