Monday, August 22, 2011

Sin's Introduction~Haiku


red fruit temptation
adam’s rib took the first bite
sin’s introduction

©Susie Clevenger 2011

8 comments:

Ginny Brannan said...

Just saw this pop up on my feed for your poetry page, and was happy to see you posted here. Perfect haiku for this Adam and Eve prompt.
'adam's rib took the first bite'
Indeed!! :-)

Irene Cortez said...

So beautiful, my attention was caught by poignant description of sin's introduction. Well-done! :-)

Irene
http://softvoiceofafreespirit.blogspot.com/2011/08/birth-of-sin.html

beccagivens said...

Very cleverly written for prompt!!
:-)

edwinbaru said...

nice and brief. I love it

Rashmi said...

So beautiful.......

Morning said...

lovely, have fun!

Rek said...

Maybe next time she should let him take more bites...well written

UmamaheswariAnandane said...

very poignant..nice one