"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Its knowledge on the scandalous happenings on Earth for sure...lovely one.
shines with all my secrets too, lovely write
the moon seems to be a vault keeping a lot of secrets safe in Her silence.. :)
Great first line - sets up the rest of the haiku. I enjoyed it.
The Moon seems to be wise :) better to be silent than expose :))
Everything hinges on the very first word of your haiku: if.Day 1: Write
A great haiku Susie.Nothing like a silent and wise moon.
Ah, what a lot this old moon must have seen.
Shines in silence... is so final yet almost majestic, loved this.
Wow! what the moon doesn't know - the mind boggles!Nicely!
Beautiful haiku - a wonderful response to the prompt, and the artwork fits perfectly.
interesting moon stories... very nice ~
Oooh, Susie ... I love this one ... if the moon could tell stories ... we would be a wit's end!!! Nicely done!!
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