Wednesday, August 31, 2011

If the Moon...haiku


if the moon could write
what secrets it could expose
it shines in silence



©Susie Clevenger 2011
Height of Haiku Challenge
September- 30 haikus in 30 days
Prompt day 1: write

14 comments:

Rek said...

Its knowledge on the scandalous happenings on Earth for sure...lovely one.

Christine said...

shines with all my secrets too, lovely write

Tarang Sinha said...

Beautiful!

Leo said...

the moon seems to be a vault keeping a lot of secrets safe in Her silence.. :)

poetry-diary.com said...

Great first line - sets up the rest of the haiku. I enjoyed it.

Nanka said...

The Moon seems to be wise :) better to be silent than expose :))

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Everything hinges on the very first word of your haiku: if.

Day 1: Write

mjshorts said...

A great haiku Susie.
Nothing like a silent and wise moon.

vivinfrance said...

Ah, what a lot this old moon must have seen.

iblogmoore (Amanda Moore) said...

Shines in silence... is so final yet almost majestic, loved this.

andy sewina said...

Wow! what the moon doesn't know - the mind boggles!

Nicely!

Traci B said...

Beautiful haiku - a wonderful response to the prompt, and the artwork fits perfectly.

Grace said...

interesting moon stories... very nice ~

beccagivens said...

Oooh, Susie ... I love this one ... if the moon could tell stories ... we would be a wit's end!!! Nicely done!!