Saturday, August 20, 2011

Haiku...Moving Lullaby



moving lullaby
turning wheels sing on concrete
traveler’s cradle


©Susie Clevenger 2011
Prompt: Lullaby

10 comments:

spiritsoflena said...

I enjoyed your take on the topic. The car has lulled many people to sleep with its "lullabye".

Tweety said...

Yes Yes I am one of them...I still am...I daily have a two hours ride to my college and I am mostly asleep as soon as I sit :) :D Liked it immensely :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

"traveler's cradle"

What a lovely line!

Leo said...

Amen to this, I fall asleep in my bus on my way to work too :) Lullaby of travels..

Christine said...

perfect, I used to have to do that to get peace, and for the little one to get some sleep

Saras said...

So original and stunning. Loved the picture too!

wordcoaster said...

Yes, yes yes! Cars are the best for sleeping in--from the cradle to the grave :)

Someone is Special said...

OMG, what a beautiful lullaby.. Sleep peacefully..

Someone is Special

beccagivens said...

The car is used so often to lull little ones to sleep -- problem, it also works on adults (and usually at the wrong time) ... :-)

Nanka said...

The monotonous drone of wheels grinding on the concrete roads does lull you sleep :) Would hate it if I was at the wheels and dozing ;)