"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Friday, August 26, 2011

Breathe My Love~(Haiku Height's Prompt #58 Breathe)


sweetheart you can breathe
inhale the promise I give
my love will not leave

our heartbeats will dance
among eternity’s stars
heaven our dance floor

quiet your distress
I speak a forever vow
my lips won’t recant

©Susie Clevenger 2011


 

6 comments :

Carol Fleisher said...

beautiful I love it! And the great pictures too!

Leo said...

Romantic haikus.. all of them :) Loved it!

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Susie Clevenger said...

Leo, for some reason I can't read your poetry on "Inside Inkdrops." I can't scroll down the page. It is like it is locked. Hopefully it is just a temporary glitch on my end and I can get to it later. I would love to read what is written there.

Susie

Judith Westerfield said...

My favorite is the last "stanza" - perfect.

Nanka said...

Wonderfully romantic and the sets of Haiku reveal a tale!!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

So very lovely. Loved it and the image is beautiful.

Melanie

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